Coping

Imagine being the most beautiful girl in your school, walking hand in hand down the hall giggling with your boyfriend, being as in love as two eighth graders could be. Now picture going to a high school party hosted by your best friend’s brother, getting hit on by 90% of the high school boys, and catching your boyfriend cheating on you with your best friend. Because of the shock, you demand to be driven home, with the only option being your best friend’s brother. As he drives you home, he begins making a move on you and ends up crashing the car, causing you to fly through the windshield. How would you cope with having to have your whole face reconstructed, no longer being known as the most beautiful girl in the school, and having to go through the heartbreak of being cheated on? In My Life in Black and White, coping is a huge theme because of all the tragic things that happen to Lexi.

After Lexi’s boyfriend, Ryan, heard about her terrible accident, he himself felt even more terrible for basically causing the accident. Since she was bedridden for a while, he would try to visit her to see how she was doing and a lot of the time try to apologize too, but since she was furious with him, she never gave him the chance to explain what exactly happened and why. (124) “If only I never met Taylor. If only Ryan never moved here. If only the party never happened. If only I didn’t get into Jarrod’s car. If only I didn’t take off my seatbelt. Ifonlyifonlyifonly.” Lexi was full of “if only’s” and that’s one of her ways of avoiding things. She avoided making contact with Taylor and Ryan, and basically all her other friends from school after the accident, and she’s avoiding the fact that all the things mentioned before happened, she just doesn’t want to admit that they truly did happen, and that’s her way of coping.

When it comes to the accident, Lexi copes in a strange way too. With her being known as the most beautiful girl in the entire school, not to mention her poor family life back home, it’s no surprise she’s quite a drama queen when it comes to overcoming the tragic accident. (122-123) “But of course she noticed. Everyone noticed. Here. Gawk away.” Lexi always took everything way out of proportion, thinking everyone was staring at her, and thinking everyone thought she looked disgusting even when they did try to give her compliments. This was one of the reasons it took her so long to carry on with what happened, her overly dramatic technique of coping.

Coping is a huge theme in My Life in Black and White, because of all the tragic things that happened to Lexi. Lexi overreacted about this a little too much, but maybe that was just her way of coping. Just be thankful you have a nice family who’s always going to be there for you and a nice warm bed to sleep in because people around the world have it a lot worse. If tragedy does ever happen to you, just take a deep breath and think it through and be thankful for how lucky you are to have other blessed things in your life.

Critique


When I read A Clean Well-Lighted Place, I was expecting a way different setting from when I saw the short film. As the author described in the text, they made the cafe seem like a dark dreary place, in which no one would ever want to visit, whereas in the film the cafe looked like a nice family place in which people visit all the time. I think the author just needed to describe the setting in better description to make how the cafe looked more clear to the reader. Some setting things were portrayed differently between the text and film, in which some bugged me but some were fine.

One of the opening scenes was that the man was sitting in a shadow near a window, but when the filmed showed the location of the man, he was sitting in a perfectly lighted booth. This was one of the differences that really bugged me, because to me it really changed the whole vibe of the film. Another setting difference between what I pictured and what was shown in the film was where the waiters were viewing the old man from. I pictured them sitting at the bar watching the old man, but in the film they were sitting what looked like in the middle of a random hallway with chairs and a table. This didn't bug me as much because it didn't affect the vibe of the story, it just kind of confused me as to why they were just randomly sitting in the hall of the cafe.

Another difference between the text and the film was how some things were portrayed. Towards the end when the old man was walking away after he got kicked out of the cafe, I was honestly prepared for there to be a splash or for the man to get hit by a car. I know that sound terrible, but that is honestly how the film was portrayed for me. I like how the man walked into the darkness and when the scene faded away, a light was all that was left, but maybe they could tweak it just so it doesn't seem like something tragic is going to happen.

Light vs. Dark

In the story A Clean, Well-Lighted Place Hemingway uses many different terms and descriptions to give off the feeling of lightness and darkness. An example of darkness is the constant mentioning of the setting being 'very late'. When I think of night time I think of darkness and, well, evil. There's really no 'bright' side to it being very late at night, besides being able to go to sleep. Another example of darkness is the different examples of emotions mentioned throughout the story. Despair, loneliness, fear. These emotions are all brought up in the story, causing the story to have a depressing and dark vibe. The third example of darkness is how the cafe is explained at looking. The story tells the readers that the tables of the cafe are all empty except for the one occupying the old man. There are multiple mentions of the cafe having shadows coming through the windows, which happen to have metal shutters. While reading I never really came across any stand out lightness symbols, but when I did, they were always followed by a dark description. When I read A Clean, Well-Lighted Place I was truly expecting a nice happy story, but when I finished the piece I felt somewhat depressed.

Statement of Faith


        Being a teenager is hard. You have to go through the stress of drama, homework, after school activities, and all the other little things outside of school. I often wake up every morning thinking to myself ‘what am I going to have to have to put up with today’. The reason I get my butt out of bed and go to school is because I know that no matter what gets in my way; God will be there to help me through it and no matter how the situation turns out, God will accept me for me.

        I believe that God accepts everyone for who they are. I also believe, that in order to go to heaven, you must believe in God. “For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.” (John 3:16) Whether you are black or white, man or woman, gay or straight, I believe God accepts you. No matter what you had done during your time on Earth, good or bad, I believe God accepts you.

        I believe that God created this world and everything and everyone on it. Genesis 1:3 “And God said “Let there be light,” and there was light.” The first of the seven days of creation was the separation of light and darkness. The second day consists of the separations of the waters. Third being the first appearance of dry ground. The fourth day created the universe, months, and seasons, with the sun determining day or night, the moon determining the months, and the stars and constellations determining the seasons. Day five and six created the vast majority of animals and mankind. On the seventh day, or the Sabbath day, it was declared as a Holy day, since God had ceased from his work.

        I believe that everybody’s prayers are answered by God when he believes the time is right. Many of my prayers have been answered, and they surely were not answered right away. Many of them have not been, though. This is so because God clearly does not think the time is right for them. When you are struggling and stressful things keep getting piled on top of those struggles, it’s not because God finds joy in seeing your pain, it’s because he knows you’re strong enough to overcome the pain. “For I know the plans I have for you, says the Lord, plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and to give you a future.” (Jeremiah 29:11)

        Participating in confirmation for these last three years have been the most practical years when it comes down to growing in my faith. I’ve learned things about the Bible that I never knew before, and I just wanted to thank everyone who had made an impact in the growth of my faith and knowledge in God and the Holy Bible.

Symbolism

Next To You

Lyrics:
You got that smile
That only heaven can make
I'll pray to God every day
That you keep that smile
Yeah, you are my dream
There's not a thing I won't do
I'll give my life up for you
'Cause you are my dream
And, baby, everything that I have is yours
You will never go cold or hungry
I'll be there when you're insecure
Let you know that you're always lovely, girl
'Cause you are the only thing that I got right now
One day when the sky is fallin'
I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
Nothing will ever come between us
'Cause I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
If you had my child
You would make my life complete
Just to have your eyes on little me
That'd be mine forever
And, baby, everything that I have is yours
You will never go cold or hungry
I'll be there when you're insecure
Let you know that you're always lovely, girl
'Cause you are the only thing that I got right now
One day when the sky is fallin'
I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
Nothing will ever come between us
I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
We're made for one another, me and you
And I have no fear, I know we'll make it through
One day when the sky is fallin'
I'll be standing right next to you, whoa
One day when the sky is fallin'
I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
Nothing will ever come between us
I'll be standing right next to you, right next to you
Stand by my side, side, side
When the sky falls down
I'll be there, I'll be there
You've got that smile
That only heaven can make
I pray to God every day
To keep you forever, oh
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Essay:
Have you ever loved someone so much it hurt? Could you ever imagine watching them die right in front of your eyes? In the music video for the song “Next to You” by Chris Brown and Justin Bieber, they both get separated by the girls they love and Chris watches the love of his life get hit by a car in the middle of the world coming to an end. The two of them are separated by a crack in the middle of the road, resulting in Chris to jump over the enormous split to say his last goodbyes to the girl, bringing the line “Nothing will ever come between us”. I think this song could be different in so many ways with all the possible point of views it could interpret.

If the girl who got hit by the car was the one singing this song, it would be so different from Justin and Chris. Considering that the world was coming to a quite devastating end, I’m sure that the girl would rather have been dead than in terror of where a safe place would be to hide. One of the lines in the song, “I pray to God every day, To keep you forever, oh” is what Chris is feeling, whereas if the woman was singing, the line would be something along the lines of “I pray to God every day, To keep you safe from danger, oh”. 


Another possible point of view would be the father of the girl who’s with Justin. Although he’s not a huge part of the song, I think if he was incorporated into it more, he would have a huge voice. The tiny part that he’s actually in he takes the girl away from Justin. This part of the video makes him look like the antagonist of the song, but if you heard his story behind doing so, maybe he wouldn’t seem like such a bad guy. In many music videos and songs this occurs, where the father splits up a couple and you never know why, making him look like the bad guy.


The third point of view this song could be in is the daughter of the man that was mentioned in the paragraph above. The ironic part of the video is that the father and daughter are the ones who hit the girl who Chris is with. Nothing tragic like that happens to the Justin’s girl, but I’m sure, just like the father she would have a huge voice. Maybe she knows her father’s idea of the relationship. Otherwise she could just be explaining how she felt about the end of the world in the song.


All of the point of views mentioned above could change the song “Next to You” by Chris Brown and Justin Bieber is so many ways. Although they may not make the most sense, it would be very interesting to hear the song sung in all of their point of views. This song was very difficult to examine, but it was a great choice because of all the possible point of views it could have been sung in.


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Creative Piece:


Justin and I sit on the escape stairs of an old, brick apartment building. He hands me a silver, heart-shaped necklace. He offers to put it around my neck. He gently grabs my hair and sets it out of the way so it doesn't get clamped into the necklace. Once its clipped, he embraces me gently, and I kiss him on the cheek. I pull away and see a smile on his face. All of a sudden we hear a car. It's my father arriving in the back ally. He climbs up the stairs, and before I can say goodbye to Justin, he grabs me and takes me to the car.

"You'll never see him again, you understand that?" My dad scolds me, shoving me in the back seat.

We drive away, stopping midway at the sight of terror. Distraught citizens roam the streets, blocking the roadway. Some aimlessly stumbling, flustered on what's happening. Others are on their cell phones trying to reach their families, saying their last goodbyes. We take a detour to a clear street and start moving again.

"Dad! Let me out of the car! I need to see him one last time!" I scream trying to tug the door open as we dodge the cement collapsing from the buildings around us. 

"That boy is trouble, you know he his. You're not going back to see him." My father screams, getting so overworked, he almost loses control of the car. 

I glare at him through the mirror and he glimpses at me. In that one second that he takes his eyes off the road, a woman runs across the street. The car slams into her and she rolls up the windshield, shattering it as she does so, and tumbles back down slamming to the cold concrete ground. My father and exit the car, for different purposes though. While he tends to the injured female, I escape and search for Justin to say my last goodbyes to him. I run up to the top of a building to see if I can see him below, and to my surprise he was standing up there. We run towards each other and never let one another go.



Revolutionary War

Have you ever lost a family member in war? Could you imagine watching them die in your own front yard. Canons blowing everywhere. Explosions of gunsmoke dissolving into the sky. Soldiers falling one by one. In the movie The Patriot, directed by Roland Emmerich, this fantasy becomes real, unlike in the book written by James Lincoln Collier and Christopher Collier, My Brother Sam is Dead. There are many similarities and differences between these two portrayals of war, though.
I was surprised at how much these two pieces were alike. In both, the father’s aren’t so fond about their oldest sons fighting in the war, but the sons go anyway. There are a lot of similar characters too. In The Patriot there’s a widowed father, an older son, another younger son, and two british leaders as main characters. My Brother Sam is Dead includes a married father of two children, a younger son and an older son, and two british leaders who are highlighted characters. Some events that happen too, are similar, such as the British leaders in both killing the oldest son. Overall the book and movie were a lot more alike than I thought they would be.
Even though there were a boatload of similarities between these two, there were quite a few differences too. In The Patriot the father doesn’t die, but in My Brother Sam is Dead, the father gets captured by some road side Loyalists and ends up passing away on a prisoner ship, leaving the younger son to be the leader of the family. Another difference is that the father in My Brother Sam is Dead doesn’t fight with the son in war, whereas the father in The Patriot fights alongside his son.
These two examples of what the Revolutionary War was like were similar and different in more ways than one. Both of these pieces modeled what war was like back then in an easily understandable way, which made both very appealing to experience. This was a great way to help me learn about the Revolutionary War and I’m glad that I got to learn about it this way.

Determination


Have you ever felt hopeless? Like you had no one? In the story Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson, Melinda experiences this feeling. At the ‘end of summer party’ she gets sexually assaulted. When her drunken-self takes over, she calls the cops, finding that to be her only option, and everyone at the party gets busted. After this event, all of her friends and everyone she’s known for years has turned on her, leaving her all alone keeping this burden on her. Throughout the school year Melinda uses determination to build up the courage to finally face her predator. Determination is a major theme in the story, as well as other stories, for several reasons.
An example of determination in this essay is how Melinda finally builds up the courage to confront IT. Despite all the emotional pain he caused her over the course of the school year, she still gathers the strength to defend herself against him when he tries to abuse her in a janitors closet the last day of school. “I grab for anything, my potpourri bowl--I throw it at him, it bounces to the floor.” Instead of giving in and letting him hurt her she uses the items around her as defense. In the end she escapes from the closet, with the satisfaction that she just defeated her worst nightmare.
A second example of determination that’s shown in this novel is how Melinda carries through everyday with not a single friend left and still has the courage to make the effort to get new friends. For the beginning of the school year she sits alone everyday at lunch until a kind young girl offers to accompany her. That day at lunch begins their friendship. Little did Melinda know that friendship would soon end midway through the school year because of her ‘depressed attitude’. Melinda’s world turns upside down at the loss of her friend. She begins to realize that with this attitude, no one will want to be around her. Her ways begin to change and because of her bravery to speak up to IT, Melinda regains respect from many students at the end of the school year.
Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins has a huge theme involving determination, too. An example in this book is when Katniss is at the reaping and hears her little sister, Prim, get called as a tribute. Following that event, Katniss volunteers in place of Prim. Since Katniss ‘wears the pants’ in the family, she is quite determined to win the Hunger Games, to come back home and support her family once again.
Another novel that includes determination as the main theme is Perfect by Natasha Friend. In this novel the main character has an eating disorder, bulimia. Throughout the book it explains her struggles and why she becomes bulimic. Isabelle, the main character, is determined to change her ways, and start eating right. In order to do so, she must join a support group with people experiencing the same issue. At the end of the novel she’s not completely cured but she is learning how to deal with the burden of grief.
The theme of determination is displayed in numerous novels, along with Speak. The feeling of hopelessness was eventually lost after Melinda stood up to IT. I believe the author’s message in this piece is to show readers that being determined to change something about yourself or to finally do that one thing you’ve been wanting to do for a while is something worth working towards.

Epilogue to the Twilight Series

As we walk along the shore listening to the whistling of the wind and watching the beautiful, warm sunset sinking below sea level, I begin to reminisce of old memories. These memories bring a realization that I have a wonderful adventure ahead of me, and that I get to spend it with people I love and care about.
Charlie is still on my mind though. Knowing that I may never get to see him again breaks my heart, but I’m sure the Cullen’s have a plan to allow for that to happen. The biggest problem that we would encounter was the color of my eyes. The more animal blood a vampire intakes, the more normal color their eyes turn, so that problem is solved. As for Renesmee’s remarkable growth in the span of a week may be a tad strange, so we may need to avoid visiting Charlie for a bit.
As Edward and I stride over to Jacob and Renesmee hand in hand, I realize that I have to accept the fact that Jacob imprinted on Renesmee. It’s has been tough, but I’m getting used to it. Knowing that she will be loved and cared about is all that matters, and I trust that Jacob won’t do anything to hurt her. Jacob knows how badly it hurts to have your heart broken, so I know he would never jeopardize his chance with Renesmee. Even though vampires and werewolves are sworn enemies, this pack is copacetic.
“Jacob,” I say continuing to walk towards him, “I’m sorry about how I acted when I found out you had imprinted on Renesmee.”
“It’s alright Bella, I understand how you would have been upset, just know that I will never do anything to hurt Renesmee,” Jacob answers.
“It’s been hard, but I have convinced myself to be okay with it, because I know no matter what I want, it will always have to be this way,” I express.
“That’s great Bella, and now I finally realize why we never worked out, it truly was meant to be,” he replies.
“We’ll leave you two alone,” Edward says looking at me smiling.
As I stare into his eyes I begin to realize that Edward truly is the best thing I could have ever asked for. I’m glad I get to spend forever with him. He’s so loving and loyal and it’s great to know he will go to the ends of the earth to protect me. With him by my side, these past four years, were great, because without him, I know for a fact that I would not be here right now. In the years to come I know he will be a great person be forever with.
As the sun sets even lower and the sky begins to darken my thoughts begin to lessen and I just live in the moment.

What Ever Happened With The Beast?


I believe that this so called "beast" is just Steven's dog. My thinking is that when the dog ran off he probably saw something suspicious and started growling at it in a way that Steven had never heard him before. I experienced this scenario one day when I was hearing strange noises that I couldn't quite figure out what was or where it was coming from. I ended up being my dog making strange noises while she was dreaming, and this is the exact same thing that I think will happened at the end of the story.

My prediction to the 3:15 story, Beast, was very much incorrect. My prediction was that there was no beast, it simply was she dog growling at some mysterious object in the woods. When watching the ending I realized that there was no way that noise came from a dog. The main reason my prediction was incorrect was because I misinterpreted the type and sound of the noise. With that said, what I think will happen next, in the real ending, is that the dog will run home and find the father. The dog will take the father to where the son was last seen with the beast. In Lassie, whenever there's a problem she runs home and barks until someone follows her to where the trouble is. That's what I believe will happen.

Evolution of Bella Swan as a Character


Imagine living your life being at risk of attack from mysterious creatures wherever you go. Having to have slick agility and great knowledge of how to escape near death situations. Not knowing who you can trust or get help from. In the Twilight Series, this fantasy becomes real. Bella, the main character, goes through all of these struggles when she moves out of her mom’s house in Florida, across the country to Washington to stay with her father. She, as a character, transforms in so many ways. She becomes her own person, and really defends herself when she faces problems. Bella, from the Twilight Series, really emerges as a character when it comes to her change, the effect on the plot, and similarities between characters from other stories and movies.
At the very beginning of the Twilight Series, Bella starts off as a shy ‘new girl’. As she becomes more comfortable with her life transition, she begins to reunite with some old friends. With the following books of the series, her life carries on, leading her into some discomforting situations. Her character begins to evolve at the end of Twilight, when she gets herself into a life threatening situation with a vampire. She gains cleverness when her enemy is trying to kill her. He begins to attack Edward, her newly found love, and to distract him she cuts herself with a piece of glass. That is what saved her life. In the 2 books following, New Moon and Eclipse, she finds herself in the same sort of situations, yet again. Now in Breaking Dawn, she must defend herself against the Volturi when they discover her half mortal-half immortal child. That’s when she becomes really independent and courageous.
Bella’s choice of moving from Florida to Forks, has a huge impact on the plot. Living in Forks changed her life forever. This is where Bella and Edward met. Her and Edward’s relationship started when the two simultaneously go up to the buffet line during their lunch at school. Bella’s clumsiness comes into play when she drops an apple that reflects off the ground back into Edward’s hands. After the awkward conversation that follows this scene, they begin to talk more. Her curiosity gets the best of her as they begin to hang out even more, and she begins to have inferences about Edward. She researches about everything that she suspects of him and figures out he’s a vampire. If she wouldn’t have been so passionate about figuring out what was different about Edward, she never would have gotten herself negatively involved with the Volturi. This aspect of the book is very important to the plot.
A character that Bella relates to is Emily Osment’s character from Cyberbully. Emily’s character begins out as a shy, average student, but her brother’s curiosity got the best of him when she signs up for a social network that is almost identical to Facebook. He hacks her account and makes some disturbing statuses, negatively impacting the rest of her life. This is a vague connection to what happens when Bella gets curious about Edward, and that action negatively impacted the rest of her life. Another connection is how much both characters matured at the end of their stories. With Emily’s character, she overcomes the bullying she was put under and stands up for herself. Bella is the same way, but it just shows differently. When someone she really cares about gets put in danger she stands up for herself and her loved one. Although both stories are almost completely different they are alike a many ways.
The growth as a character when faced with change, the effect on the plot, and similarities with other characters from other books and movies is how Bella from evolves in the Twilight Series. I find it very interesting on how much Bella’s character grows and matures as a character.

A Day I Will Never Forget

Author's Note: I didn't think that my Patriot's Pen piece was very good, so I decided to write this essay to bring along with this. This essay is about when I met Justin Bieber and went to his concert. 

"Justin! Justin! Justin!” Came from the mouths of 20,000 girls screaming to their idol. The energy was visible. The excitement was heard. This is what began one of the best 9 hours of my life.
 
As we arrive to the BMO Harris Bradley Center my nerves begin to fill with Bieber Fever. The first thing we spotted were the clothing items. I instantly turned 180 degrees and begged my mother to get me something.
“Fine.” She sighed, as her infamous answer exited her mouth.
I began to geek out even more than I already was. “There are so many choices!” I said puzzled on what merchandise to purchase. As I heard one of the salespeople finish with a customer, I turned my head to see what would soon join my family of clothing, a “Swaggy” sweatshirt. I asked my mother for approval. Once I got a nod that seemed quite hesitant, I turned to the workers and asked for the sweatshirt.
“This is our last one. It’s a large.” The woman said to me.
I turned to my mother and said “I don’t care what size it is, I need that sweatshirt.”
She laughed, and I turned, an inch away from grabbing my gift. Jenna began to contemplate on what she should buy, she pointed out a hat that I would not leave without buying. My mother, who was getting even more annoyed by the second, allowed me to get it, ensuring that I know this will be the last thing I buy.
Just as a slight breeze slipped by, I covered up with my sweatshirt. Now that I'm warmed up, I enjoyed the seemingly long wait to meet my idol, Justin Bieber.
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As the doors began to open, bringing in huge crowds of hyperventilating girls, my nerves began to fill with yet another dose of Bieber Fever. When the group of friends that I was with are allowed to go into the building, we started fangirling, imagining the fantastic moment ahead.
We waited, and waited until finally we were next in line. Almost in tears, I started to realize what I’m about to experience. I’m going to meet Justin Bieber. The 18-year-old celebrity I have been idolizing since 2009. My moment had finally come. The bodyguard motioned us to go through the door. A black curtain is about 2 feet away from the doorway, and guarding at the entrance, is Justin’s bodyguard, Kenny, who we coincidentally have been searching for all day.
“Oh my God. You’re Kenny!” I say, unconscious of what words are rambling out of my mouth.
“Hey, What’s Up?” He replied. “Alright guys, you’re up.”
“Heh, thank you.” I think I said-- I hope I said.
We file in one by one. I’m unfortunately the last one in. When I catch a glimpse of his face, I vividly remember literally feeling my eyes pop out of my head. I quickly get in line with the rest to capture the picture that will forever remain in my possession. I begin to walk away, when all of a sudden I remember I had written him a note, I turn around and hand him the note. As he reaches for the note, he winks at me. Followed by holding the note against his heart, and replying with, “Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.”
The rest of the night was a blur because of how crazy it was, put I will honestly never forget this moment.

Women's Rights

Author's Note: As my Patriot's Pen piece, I decided to write about Women's Rights. I mainly focused on why the law should have been passed sooner, and the effects of that not happening. Enjoy!


In 1920, the law was finally passed for women’s rights, after a 60 year long fight, presented by five brave women, to get this law passed. This restriction against women has affected many things over the past 300 years. Such things as friction between men and women, leading to high divorce rates and lower marriage rates, generating to teens and young adults being confused upon what constitutes a good man/ father or good woman/ mother. If the founding fathers would have given women rights sooner I believe that present day America would be much more impacted by women.
One of the impacts that passing this law sooner could have had is a more female dominated government. All that women used to be good for was housework including cooking and cleaning. Which turned into keeping little girls from going to school, and instead practicing their housework. Preventing women from having rights for so many years has lead them to being shy and not speaking up for what they believe. These restrictions possibly could have affected the fact that we have yet to elect a female president, also preventing more women to run for congress, and lowering the action with all the opportunities women could have connecting to the government. By allowing women to have rights earlier the government system could have much more female dominance, by now.
Another possible difference could be less abuse towards women. It’s a known fact that women are abused more often than men. Statistics state that one out of three women get abused at least once throughout their lifetime. There are many stories you hear about abuse against women, including this one lucky survivors, Mary. She was in a 10 year committed relationship, that eventually turned into a verbally and emotionally abusive relationship. After a while the man of the relationship began hitting and slapping the woman. This injustice could be brought on by the idea that since women didn’t have much say earlier in America, that men still over power them, when really we are just as equal as each other. This crime could have been easily prevented if women were granted rights sooner, creating a different idea for men, about equality.
One last component that could have been affected by an earlier change to women’s rights is the equal pay. It’s a known fact that most, if not all, companies do not have equal pay, and pay their male workers more than their female. My mom works with men, and she actually does more work than one of the men there, and does get paid less. For some circumstances, where if men are doing more work than women at a certain job, it is fair for them to get paid more, but with this example, it is nowhere near fair. All I’m trying to say, is that as long as the job tasks are equal, the pay should be as well.
I believe that present day America would be a lot more female dominated if the founding fathers were to give women rights sooner. Women are just as equal as equal as men, which  means they should have just as much freedom and equality, too.

Cause/Effect Piece


Author's Note: This piece is about the cause and effect in the story Life of Pi. I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding of cause and effects in books.

In Life of Pi there are many conflicts. The main one being that Pi is stranded on a life boat with a tiger and a few other animals, spending 227 days in that condition. Pi and his family wanted to move to Canada, causing this. On their way there, the boat they are traveling on sinks, leaving him stranded on a life boat. The results of this event happening is that Pi and the tiger form a great relationship, leaving the other animals to symbolize important people in his life.

The effects on this event is that without it happening, the book would be quite short. If even the slightest thing was different in  this book, the rest of the story would be completely different. For example, if the boat didn't sink in the first place there would be a whole different ending to the boat. Even if the boat had sank, but the sailors hadn't thrown those four animals on the lifeboat with Pi their would be no bonding. This book's plot would have been affected, even if just one little detail was changed.

This One Time at Dance Camp..

"I like your bike!” shouted Molly.
“I like your helmet!” yelled Jenna.
“I like your shirt!” Molly exclaimed.
“I like your shorts!” Jenna out the window.
As Richard bikes away, Jenna finally yells out the window with the most awkward tone ever, “Talk to you later, in those shorts.”
At that moment I thought all of us were going to die of laughter. That’s what began the scariest night of dance camp.
As the day carried on, and it became night again, a few of my teammates and I were hanging out in their dorm.

All of a sudden we heard Emma exclaim, “Look it’s Richard!”
We all huddled around the bed nearest to the window and start shouting arbitrary things out the window.
I burst out “Deuces!”
“Duck-Face!” Emma follows with.
The five of us burst out with laughter when all of a sudden a flashlight streams through the window, and we realize this is not Richard we are screaming to, it’s a security guard. We all duck down and start hyperventilating, pondering what we should do. One of us sneak off the bed and ducks down, creeping to shut the lights off, while two of us are slowly, nonchalantly closing the blinds. Allison peaks out the window and notices that “Richard” had disappeared, assuming he entered the building. At that instant we each are now freaking out as if a murderer was coming after us. After a couple minutes pass, and nothing happens, a sigh of relief escapes us all. Of course, once we all are calmed down, there’s a rapping at the door. Knowing that it’s the security we all fall silent.
“Don’t say anything!” Molly whispers to us all.
The rapping comes again.
“I have a plan!” Allison mutters. “Pretend you’re sleeping and I’ll go get the door in a drowsy manner.”
“But I’m not supposed to be here!” I murmur.
A blank, despairing, expression flushes all their faces. When all of sudden I have an idea. I jump off the bed and constrain myself against the closet wall of the dorm. I motion to Allison that it’s safe to answer the door to the security guard. As she gets up we hear a third set of rapping at the door, followed by the jingling of keys. Allison rushes to the door and opens it.
“Sorry, we didn’t answer sooner we were trying to go to sleep.” Allison says with the best poker face.
“Oh. Well there were complaints that there was a loud noise coming from this dorm room and I heard girls shouting out the window.” He explained as he made his way to the room where we were previously socializing.
Just then, a miracle happened. Upstairs, music came blaring on. We simultaneously looked up towards the ceiling as if we could see through it, trying to pinpoint the exact dorm room the obnoxious noise was coming from. The security guard apologized for “waking us up” and rushed out the door, hopped onto an elevator, and anxiously tried to find that dorm. Once we were positive that he was gone I came out from hiding. As the four of them continued to quiver, I made sure the coast was clear and I immediately bolted out of there and dashed to my dorm. I zipped to my room and belly-flopped onto my bed, continuing to laugh about the previous event.
Looking back on that priceless night at dance camp, I honestly think we shouldn’t have overreacted as much as we did. I don’t regret doing anything that night at all, because we didn’t get in that much trouble. That unforgettable night we be engraved into our minds forever.

The Effects of Being a Teenager

Author's Note: This piece is about the conflict and resolution in the story My Life in Black and White I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding of conflict and resolution.

In the book My Life in Black and White, the main conflict is that the main character has to recover from not only a social, but a physical trauma, too. After that, her life changes forever. The situation wouldn't have been as dramatic if she didn't isolate herself from the whole world. I admit, if my face went through a windshield, I would be embarrassed of what I looked like afterward for maybe a week, not 6 months.

Eventually, this embarrassment fades away, once the main character joins a support group of recuperating teens involving their self-consciousness. She regains her friendship with her best friend, yet never forgives her ex-boyfriend. Honestly, everybody makes mistakes, and I may have forgiven him considering the circumstances that he was in.

DBQ: What Killed Off the Colonist?


Plants were withering. Illnesses were spreading. There were shouts of victory exploding from the mouths of the Indians. In the early 1600s English Settlers sailed to the land that would later be known as America, not knowing what hardships were ahead. Once they settled, the colonists came in contact with many Indian Tribes, who started out as allies, but later became enemies. Colonists were hit with droughts, on and off, for many years. Many hardships made life in Early Jamestown difficult to survive in. Now the pondering question is, why did so many colonists die? I believe so many colonists died because of the unpredictable weather, making it difficult for crops to grow; the many battles between them and the Indians, and all the diseases that were spread once they settled there.

The unstable weather affected many things associated with the food supply. According to Document B there was a very severe drought lasting around 5 years, preventing crops to grow and supplying the animals with a minimal source of water to drink. This didn’t just affect one of the colonists food sources, but two. Also stated in Document B, Jamestown experienced a time classified as (or appropriately named) the “starving time” during the winter of 1609- 1610. This period was right in the middle of the 5 year drought, which goes to show how bitter this drought really was. In Document D, it is told that a group of English colonists marched to the Indians and demanded to acquire a partial amount of their grain. When the Indians disagreed, the English became enraged and broke out in attack. Heads and limbs were slashed. In the end, the Indians were defeated, leaving the English with grain. Instead of taking it back to the other colonists though, Francis Wells, and many other colonists fled Jamestown and returned to England, leaving the remaining settlers in the hands of the Indians, and God.

That point now leads us into our next possibility of death for the settlers; the Indians. Although, when the colonists first settled, they were allies with the Powhatan Tribes, as they years went by, the bonding between them ended, and they soon became mortal enemies, engaging in battles almost every chance they got. Battles would be started, and lives would be over. In 1607, only 7 settlers were killed due to Indian attacks. In 1608 there wasn’t a single death due to Indian attacks. Until the years of 1609 to 1610, where the number of deaths increased to around 134. (Doc E) Not all of these deaths were instantaneous, many injuries that never got treated, and with that, we come to the third most likely reason of the deaths of colonists.

Diseases of all sorts killed off the many colonist of Jamestown. These diseases could have been brought over from England, introduced in America, or even possibly received through the Indian attacks. As reported by Document E, while settlers were living in Jamestown, there was a total of 2 surgeons and 2 apothecaries for around a total of 200 colonists. Obviously, not all could have gotten treated. Many of these diseases hadn’t even had a cure yet, especially the ones that originated in America. Others could have been a result of Indian attacks that weren’t fatal. Infections could have set in on the open wound and there could have been no treatment available. Eventually that infection could have spread throughout the body and cause death or a severe illness. In Document A, it states that Jamestown started out with brackish water, a mix between salt and fresh water, creating one of the only water sources unsanitary. This was caused by tides that would occur twice a day. Human waste was also disposed into this water source, and according to Carville Earle, it would just fester there. (Doc A) When colonists would drink this water they were likely to get infected in some way. Overall, this time period was prone to getting many disease, and had few ways to treat them.

The unpredictable weather, many battles between the settlers and Indians, and all the diseases that were spread once the colonists were settled in Jamestown, is why I believe so many people died. With all these possibilities for causes of death, it’s uncertain what killed off most of the colonists. This question will likely be considered many times in the future, continuing to stump us all.

Retelling

My life in Black and White

There's always that one girl who's life seems perfect. Or close to it at least. In this book, there happens to be this one girl. Until the dreaded night where her whole life changes. When she unexpectedly walks in on her boyfriend cheating on her with her best friend, she demands to be taken home. That's when her whole life comes crashing down. On her way home her best friend's brother gets distracted while driving home and the two get in a car accident. Her face goes through a windshield, and both her inner beauty  and outer beauty are changed forever. The way she handles it is a little over the top, but in the end she regains her friendship and learns to live with the change

"Good leadership consists in showing average people how to do the work of superior people."

I can totally connect to this quote because I am a huge leader in school. Not only with my working ethnic, but just over all. Since I'm in eighth grade, I need to be a leader for the seventh graders so they know how to act this year, next year when they're in 8th grade, and for the future.  This doesn't only apply in school but in the after school activities, too.

 Just yesterday, I was put in charge to teach all the dancers some dances from UDA camp. Now, not necessarily saying that the students are average and I'm superior, I mean most of the dancers are much more talented than me, but some of them didn't go to camp, therefore they don't know the dance. Last year when my grade were the guinea pigs of dance, the eight graders weren't very helpful when it came to perfecting a dance. With one of the dances we learned they leaders had us line up and do the dance and they would tell us when we could sit down which also told us that we were doing the dance perfectly. I was still standing along with a few other dances and that honestly didn't do anything ot progress my mistake fixing, it actually humiliated me, which changed my attitude towards the whole dance. 

This year I plan on not teaching like that, I plan on being helpful and not teaching my way, but the way the students I'm teaching want. If they need help, I will help them, if they want to move on I will teach them more, and if they  want to try it to music, I will put the music on. By doing this, it shows the seventh graders how to help the new dancers next year, by not humiliating them. Bottom line is that I want to have a positive affect on the new students in our school, and hope that that affect will rub off on them and make it a great year for everyone that follows them!

A Girl's Bestfriend! 5/18

Author's Note: We were asked to make a list of 3 true things about us and 1 fiction thing about us. Once those 4 things were recorded, we were then directed to write about them at a high level in order to confuse our peers on whether or not our story was true. This was a difficult task for me to accomplish, but once my juices were flowing I got right on track, ENJOY!(:

How many times have you and your best friend fought? Not talked for a couple days? Weeks even. Maybe you totally kicked them out of your life. How does that feel to lose a friend? Fortunately, I wouldn’t know, because my best friend is someone who never leaves My side, literally. This companion of mine fetches balls, loves to get her butt scratched, and is the cutest cuddle-bug ever. Having my dog as my greatest friend has been the best choice of my life. Especially when it comes to secrets. If you tell one of your friends this huge secret, knowing the middle school life-- it’ll be around the whole school in what.? Like 1 day.? Maybe even just first or second hour, when I have something that I just can’t hold it in anymore, the one and only “person” that I trust is my spazzy little companion, hunch-a-bunch. Another reason as to why my dog is my most prized acquaintance, is because when I’m sad and about ready to cry, she not only knows that I am sad, but she also tries to cheer me up. I should necessarily say “tries” because she basically succeeds 100% of the time. If I’m lonely and I need a buddy to play with she’s always willing to go outside and keep me company as I practice volleyball. All I’m trying conclude out of this creative writing piece is that, a dog is not only a man’s best friend; but also a girls best friend!