Author's Note: I love sunsets, and to me they're inspirational to write about so I chose to write about them!Enjoy!
The Lights in the sky, so Beautiful
Glowing like the moon
Rainbow-like, So Colorful
With Colors Red to Blue
Sitting there, So Peaceful
Really Helps To Sooth
The Lights in the sky, so Beautiful
Glowing like the moon
Rainbow-like, So Colorful
With Colors Red to Blue
Sitting there, So Peaceful
Really Helps To Sooth
I really like sunsets too! I really enjoyed this poem, but I think you should add one more line.
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Thanks for the tip! My idea for this piece was to have the ABABAB Line Rhyme, and so it was hard to find an A and B that related to each that would rhyme with the other A's and B's-- if that makes any sense. Anyways, I'll be sure to add more lines when I find the time to! :)
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